Monday, March 1, 2010


Rosalie Young
March 1, 2010
Journal 7-News story



MOORHEAD---If you have time on your hands and a strong back, Moorhead needs you. Spring flooding is on its way and this city is gearing up. You only need to bring your own gloves, the shovels will be provided. With a heated building and heated restrooms, the sandbagging center will open this morning at 7 a.m.
Pioneer Press
Associated Press-Volunteers to start sandbagging in Moorhead
http://www.twincities.com/allheadlines/ci_14491001

1 comment:

  1. Grade: 9/10
    • Avoid writing in second person in news stories.
    • After gloves there should either be a semicolon, or a new sentence should begin.

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